Ever woken up from a calm sleep to be ear fucked from all sides by bad news? Wow oh wow, did I today. A dozen different scenarios including phones, school, emails, and even right here at the bay. I'm having the lousiest last week of school.


A Rude Awakening

Bedroom visions cast aside
The calling masquarade is pried
Way open for all those to see
A clam molested in the sea
Though the pearl has mannish chinks
Painful sorrow clammy sinks
Rude awakening from the deep
Sunlight martyrs drown to sleep
Pressure's bulging from both ends
Sun and Moon no longer friends
Will the octopus I saw
Rip terror from the whale's jaw
And slam in, thrust it into me
A humble victim of the sea?




Poetry by weirdzarun
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Written on 2007-06-12 at 06:35

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Yes I too have days like this. When you wake and the first words are OH Fuck!lol that's a bad sign michael. I love your poem, full of divinely sponsaneous inspiration that these pressures of life give to us poets. Well done, now the blockage is cleared, you are gonna have a great week, thats an order! winking at you, ruffling your hair...Tai
2007-06-12