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Her love was a love I could not hold mistake
With eyes all a kimbo, her heart held in limbo
Her audible mind, cool and translucent and keen
As any an eerie a lake




Poetry by weirdzarun
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Written on 2009-10-16 at 05:37

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Amna Ehsan
audible mind, translucent and keen...an eerie a lake...Beautiful!!
seems you really know her love:)
nice lines crafted here dear Michael.
2009-10-17


Amna Ehsan
audible mind, translucent and keen...an eerie a lake...Beautiful!!
seems you really know her love:)
nice lines crafted here dear Michael.
2009-10-17



Hey Lovely Michael, you do know the way of a woman in loves heart. The imagery of the lake, as deep and clear as it can only be in stillness and tranquility, says it all.

Not sure about that title though!lol a bit short, h for? hole - heart - heal - health

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-10-16