Love Song

The strings are crying into the crowd
The musik screams into my eyes
Stars ignite inside
Chills rise the hairs of my neck
It is as awesome as waking next to you
It paints a picture so picture perfect true
As chords of scales unite in melencholy harmony
A masterpiece of a dream floating through
I see the stars, I see them burst into nebula
How wonderful your touch
Creating creative musik with our lust
And loving someone down to the last touch
The musik tapers away into dusk
How could anyone love anyone so much



Poetry by AZ
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Written on 2005-06-27 at 15:39

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
there's a lot of tenderness in this poem... i like the comparisons with music... i find it fitting... the only thing i've noticed that sticks out is the spelling for music and melancholy but aside from that i think you expressed yourself nicely here... thanks for sharing :)

later...xx
2005-06-28


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
a good piece, put off little with the word musik, other than that though all's good.
2005-06-27