a couplet in response to Zoya's challenge


Fire in the heart by M.A.Meddings

Fire in the heart

by M.A.Meddings

Tear out the Fire from the heart and destroy it
it is safer that way and better deny it ever was



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Written on 2005-11-25 at 16:52

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Zoya Zaidi
Awww! Mike, I missed this one...
This is so very beautiful and poignant...
Yet, I would never tear the fire out of my heart, I would rather burn and scorch to death, then to extinguish the fire...
Yet, I am touched both by the intensity of your couplet and your rising up to the challenge!!!!
((((((Hugs for that heart of yours))))))
xxx, Zoya
2005-12-14


Esti D-G
ouch! am aching with pain after reading this!
luv esti
2005-12-01


BlueyedSoul
You again show your gift and talent as a poet! The wonder of complexity and simplicity is shown in this short verse.

~BlueyedSoul
2005-11-26