There is beauty and passion in a thunder storm that can be enlightened to love and deep love has its own pent up Thunder rolls. Thats the way she makes me feel


Listen To The Thunder Roll by M.A.Meddings

Can you feel this tenderness rumble 
Don't you see the blood rush in me 
Cant  you feel the passion  on fire 
Burning so deep inside of me 
Don't you see the useless wreck I am
Whenever you're not near 
Don't you see this gentle love I have
That banishes all my fear 
Can't you feel my tenderness rumble 
Just like a thunder roll 
Don't you see you're part of me 
So deep within my soul
Then watch how my tenderness trembles
Listen to the thunder roll





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-06-26 at 08:16

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she
How do I make this comment without sounding out of place???? Hhhhmmmhhh....I understand the thunder rumbles..I even believe you can see the lightning in the other person's eyes. It is something I cannot find the words to explain so that it describes what I am feeling just right. Still, a beautiful and thoughtful poem:)
2007-06-29


Rob Graber
Highly original imagery bordering on oxymoronic!
2007-06-26


penfold18
I like the analogy here Micheal of feelings and emotions, very romantically done.
2007-06-26


Kathy Lockhart
You make me tremble! Wow this is such wonderful poetry. I love the comparisons and the feelings that this invokes. I love this thunderous feeling that comes over me all because of you. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-06-26