Rob Graber
Cool anti-war poem! Stanza 4 is so good it could stand on its own I think...
2007-06-26

gills
A few great wars were headed by women Bodacia (how ever u spell her name) and plenty of women fight to protect their countries, I did enjoy your poem and it did leave me thinking plus adding a comment :)
2007-06-26

Elle
as a mother of sons, I have often wondered if the physical act of conceiving, carrying and giving birth means that we value life - but that is too easy an argument. I've watched my sons grow - and like girls, they have feelings and conscience. Physically males are more aggressive - you notice the difference from an early age between the sexes. No, I don't think its just men - look through history and you will see that some of the greatest instigators of wars have not just been men - nature verses nurture is perhaps the key to this - an interesting poem, thank you for sharing

Elle x
2007-06-26

John Ashleigh
This poem is so meaningfull and true, With so much wit you pour emotions out into relative words that everyone can relate to. I think you have really exstended everyones knowledge here and expressed and truely written a wonderfull poem. Congratulations.
2007-06-26