A bit cheeky really but well judge for yourselves. A respectfully meant Haiku


Paradise by M.A.Meddings

Slow rippling surges
Gasping cries of ecstacy
Paradise of love



Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Read 506 times
Written on 2007-06-27 at 20:13

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Phyllis J. Rhodes
powerfully tender, ecstatically romantic, sensously sexy and totally respectful.
2007-06-29


she
If only all men could see things the way you do, I believe this world would be way better.......it all begins with how you love someone. Beautiful piece, Mike. Really beautiful!
2007-06-29


Kathy Lockhart
Michael this is a lovely haiku! Beautifully composed and written with tenderness. I sigh. It is amazing how 17 syllables can create such, well, ...feeling. : ) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-06-27