A rhyiming Tanka for a special someone in my heart   


Since You Went Away by M.A.Meddings

Since you went away 
There is no sunshine this day
Just darkness I see
Until your wonderful beauty
Returns this life unto me



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Written on 2007-07-17 at 07:11

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Kathy Lockhart
oh what a sweet expression of your heart's longing. I miss you too. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-07-19


TeeTee
short but brief great write this speaks volumes alone
2007-07-17


Phyllis J. Rhodes
So bittersweet and heartfelt. She will return, but the gap left until she does it huge!
2007-07-17



This is just like the beginning of a beautiful love song's lyrics...
2007-07-17


Hagzissa
Aww.... that missing is really tearing one apart,isn't it?
Lovely expressed here.
Jeanette
2007-07-17


kath
And your special someone will hear the words of your heart keeping her safe untill she returns ....a soft and tender write for a loved one ....

best wishes
kath
2007-07-17