Journey is my fave poem
that I have written :)

I hope you like this new
installment [the 4th] in my series :)

~L.~


Journeying Trials


Each person's life's journey
is supposed to have challenges,
and it's how you choose to
jump each hurdle that
reflect's the person you see,
it is not destiny but these
trials of life that mould and shape
the person you are meant to be.

It does you no good to question
your personality 'cos of other's reactions,
If people cannot accept
YOU for WHO you ARE then it is their loss,
DO NOT let their misconcepted negativity
change or dampen your
unique and beautifully shining star
for you are WONDERFUL just the way you are.

30/07/07



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-07-30 at 12:12

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Colin Skilton
Ah Liz my Aussie friend
in a nutshell is what you have written. we are all special and we all need to remember that when we are feeling sad and lonely.
Bless you fro sharing with us
Colinxxx

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2007-08-16


kid
this is a very good didatic poem if some reads this it might change the person's life and altitude.
You have written a very nice and simple piece
2007-07-31


Kathy Lockhart
beautifully expressed Liz. Your day to shine is today! And, tomorrow and the day after and on and on. Shine Star Shine!
2007-07-30


Will
Postive Message written with a Great Flare
2007-07-30


sabereh lotfian
So true Liz. :) I can really relate to this for it is a VERY heart-felt flowing poem expressing a great truth ,that we're WONDERFUL
just the way you are, so keep shining for you are wonderful the way you are.

LOved it(especially the last verse) :D
Sabereh

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2007-07-30


Hagzissa
Exactly!
Every person is unique and it's a blessing to REALLY be loved and accepted for the real you , every side of you.
I love this one! Excellent writing!
2007-07-30