trying too hard to write a poem
and i was bored.

~L.~


Close your eyes and relax


Close your eyes and relax
it's easier said then done
relax and close your eyes
although hidden there's always sun.

Trying too hard, wanting too much
feeling your heart race beneath your skin
wanting too much, trying too hard
seeing the end but not knowing where to begin.

Close your eyes and relax
it's easier said then done
relax and close your eyes
although hidden there's always sun.

27/08/07






Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-08-27 at 05:01

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Justin
This is a fabulous write. I love the phrase "Although hidden there's always sun".

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2007-10-07


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
thanks for this one, Liz....I think your metaphor here is great...
And what's more, you've hit me at an opportune time, as I"m
looking for the sun that you claim is always there...hope I find
it soon as frustration is starting to set in...(would that be
a sunset?)

xxxx Stan

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2007-08-28