red eye

i just got back from hawaii

jangled nerves soothed
urges
satisfied
tickled fancies

garage door broke
overdue bills
traffic jammed

bicycle stolen
alarms sounded
cut my pay
kangaroo courted

falling leaves
roaming dogs
out of time
my back is sore

having
a great time
wish you were here
anyway
i can't believe
i just got back from hawaii





Poetry by ti runo
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Written on 2007-09-25 at 01:15

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Rob Graber
When you got back, you REALLY got back...good write.
2007-09-25


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
the joy of coming back eh? hehe... i could feel harsh disappointment for coming back home from vacation... hope you survive lol ;) good poem :) welcome to poetbay :f xx
2007-09-25