Honestly

There is a moment

Prior to sleep

Upon the edge

Of slumbers deep

When all defences
Fade away

And at that moment
Should you say.........I love you.

I might believe



Poetry by Yanto
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Written on 2007-10-17 at 19:41

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Yanto this is a poem uncluttered by tired phrases and is that textone meets now and then that actually shouts out Dylan thomas well done sir this is so good rgds nuke
2007-10-21


Kathy Lockhart
that quasi dream-like place where the possible and the impossible merge to become one. I love the emotional depths of this romantic piece.
2007-10-21


Rob Graber
Skeptical yet beautiful and romantic. Bravo!
2007-10-21


weirdzarun
Very beautiful text. I commend you. Good work.
2007-10-20