Something I've written after returning from the doctor where I got a very unpleasant diagnose.


Impossible



Why can't I go and fish
With other peoples wish
And all the world just flees
And dreams of all the peace

Why can't I just be heard
Without some getting hurt
Or silently sail at sea
Yet wisely all forsee

Why couldn't roses blew
And let me play the blues
Without me fear my tear
Without me hear this here

But now
Maybe I can cry me a river ...
From a boat



Poetry by Century
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Written on 2007-11-01 at 17:05

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Horst...good but sad poem...If it helps at all, know that
all your friends here at PoetBay will be pulling for you and for
the time the diagnose changes for the better...Keep plugging!!!

Stan
2008-07-02



There is so much sorrow and disappointment behind and between these lines... So strong feelings, but so gently expressed!
2008-02-02


Edgar John Jackson
I always ask the same questions and i think everybody does. Life could be simple if everybody could learn they have to live their own lives and let people around live as they want to. thanks 4 sharing this..;)
2007-11-10


Janine>K
great poem

why, cant life just be simple?

Just remember you will never be placed in situation which you cant see through. I hope that your unpleasant diagnoses will make you stronger...just as strong as your poem

Good job

Janine
2007-11-07


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Century , yoir poem says so much , captures exprese what you were and are thinkeing. I trust the diagnoses proves to be unfounded what eaver it is. I trust that soon you will be abull to pent a poem thst showsit eas wrong and just the Dr. is just being courshes . Just in case.
All the best with you in thought , Ken D Williams
2007-11-01