Sonnet


End of a Beginning







END OF A BEGINNING

I wish I could have brought you in the spring;
But then, spring might not come this year, I said.
She answered, a thoughtless sound, and down the lane
We drove, trailed by my prophecy of dead
And dying love. Dully, the listless lake
Kept breaking, reflecting with sullen light
The heavy sky; and I knew, not for my sake,
Would the sun prophesy spring before night.
I stopped where the road turned under the oak,
And her warm-scented hair brushed my shoulder;
Spring came early just then, caught in my throat;
I reached from myself, only to hold her;
But carelessly she moved elsewhere; and then,
O Spring, the world's tears were raining again.







Sonnet by ethom
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Written on 2008-03-21 at 09:32

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Kathy Lockhart
beautiful from the heart poetry written with such tenderness
2008-03-24


Rob Graber
As a sonnet-lover I have quite a lot to say about this poem, a good bit of which is quite technical. Here I will only say that despite its flaws I like it very much; the writer shows much promise I think.
2008-03-21