the soothing and relaxing life on the beach


beach life

my mind is drifting with the clouds
without any worry or doubts
i am watching the trees sway
trying to gently disobey
i am being wrapped around the comforting water
i feel like i became mother nature's daughter
my heart became as pure as this sand
i call this now, my holy land



Poetry by LaLa
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Written on 2008-03-27 at 07:01

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I love the beach too, been spending a lot of time there lately and hope to keep going in future....a place of freedom I love so much. Great write, you capture it well, Tai
2008-07-29


Esti D-G
I feel the relaxation oozing from your poem. Well done
2008-04-27


rob lester
peace.thats how it felt.
2008-04-13


anoop.m.r
dear poet,
welcome to poet bay.
your poem is good. write more.
I invite u to my page.
anoop.m.r
2008-03-27