this is how someone felt about me. i wrote this from their point of view.


without your emotion

stand clear of the closing doors
but i heard you have no remorse
aren't you proud, aren't you lucky
that your brain is fried as chicken in kentucky
you have no concerns and no cares
and i've been having my worst nightmares
you have closed the door
by not remembering the night before
i thought you loved me
and now i see



Poetry by LaLa
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Written on 2008-09-02 at 20:25

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
Goodness, you must have broken a heart here. I admire your openness for sharing this. It is quite ingenious and very entertaining. Hope you were able to handle the onslought okay.
2008-09-02



lol I would call this wishful thinking on your part my dear LaLa, but without the right others emotions to stir the brew, it's a bit of a storm in a tea cup for both parties...Agreed. it sounds like this person is medicated in order not to feel at all, much less remorse, but we all have to deal with life somehow....

Still looking for my way


Tai, enjoying your few poems here
2008-09-02