This piece is scenery of my moment, when first time saw the ONE I am in love.


MY LOVE

Never ever was struck before that hour
with love so abrupt and sweet.
Her face bloomed like a fresh flower
stole my heart away complete.

My face turned light, a deadly pale
and legs declined to walk away.
When she looked what could I ail
My soul and all body turned to clay.

Then red blood rushed to my face
took my vision quite away.
Trees and bushes round the place
appeared midnight at noonday.

Could not able to see a single wing
terms from my eyes did start.
Spoke as chords do from the string
blood burnt encircling my heart.

Are flora the spring's choice
Is love's bed always snow
She seemed to hear my quite voice
Not love appeals to know.

I never saw so sweet a face
As that I positioned before
My heart has left its residing place
And can return no more.

02/04/08




Poetry by Amir
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Written on 2008-04-02 at 06:18

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BlueyedSoul
Amir, this is such a beautiful expression of love and devotion for the one you have found. I so enjoyed reading each word!
Wonderful work.
~Blue
2008-04-04



A sweet poem...lovely indeed....
2008-04-02