Your Shadow

I am the shadow
You pushed away
I am the Jane Doe
With nothing to say

You pushed away
Before I could share
With nothing to say
I fade with no care

Before I could share
You broke my heart
I fade with no a care
My heart torn apart

You broke my heart
I am the Jane Doe
My heart torn apart
I am your shadow




Poetry by Downtown
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Written on 2008-05-29 at 04:03

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nature
sometimes we feel invisable like a shadow of who we really are and its not good for our souls. never let anyone make you feel this way. You are great and yet another great poem
2008-08-26


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I like the repeating rhyme it adds to the poem and the heartbreak, a well thought out poem

Elle x
2008-05-29