LurieJune
Though I have respect for the poet and for the creativity of the poet I have to say that this is dangerous. We damn ourselves with our selfish acts and hatred towards whatever or whoever we disagree with.
Good flow and meter.
2005-07-08

StillHoppin
i can see why you feel the way you feel, i think we have all felt that way at times, and yet i agree with chasingtheday on this one, that we damn ourselves a little more with every passing day. a legitimate thought you have here, but taken with the realization that it can't all be blamed on God. anyone who doesn't realize that s/he is capable of pure evil, doesn't really know him/herself. we are all guilty. what sort of God is he? The sort of God that would damn us? Or the sort of God that would not lift a finger against us, even as we nailed him to a post and stuck it in the ground, then watched him drown as his lungs filled up with his own fluids-asphyxiating him. Funny, he didn't draw the line at his own murder, but before long he will drawn a line to the endless slaughter we subject one another to on a daily basis. so, a good read, but there is always more than one point of view. you have presented this P.O.V. with skill. Respectfully,

~StillHoppin
2005-07-07

chasingtheday
a good short piece here, showing your thoughts on god. damnation, we damn oursleves i think on the journey. but such is the way of us, we learn.
2005-07-07