She got the universe in here hair





Wonder happens In a silent night

Red tears from heaven falling down and up


She's like the star you wish on

She's the star that cant come down

She got the universe in here hair


A magic flower eaten not forgotten

A senses of blue

A lonely shadow


She's the star in the long dream

She's the point of no return

She's the light fore all life








Poetry by Mr painter
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Written on 2008-09-09 at 09:46

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What a wonderfully uplifting write this is my painterly friend! loved ever word, apart from one typo....5th line 'her'. I love the red tears imagine falling down and up....so surreal as is the enigma of her. smiling at you, Tai
2008-09-16


Kathy Lockhart
The title caught my eye and then it became so beautiful as I read it in its context in the poetry. The picture is light and airy with tones deep and rich. : ) kathy
2008-09-09


Janine>K
such a nice relaxing romantic poem...glad u have somebody u can call your universe! great poem
2008-09-09