ReAlItY

ReAlItY hAvE Hit ME hArD
RiGhT iN tHe HeArT

I jUsT wOkE UP FrOm ThIs DrEaM
i'Ve BeEn DrEaMiNg fOr 5 MOnThS

LiKe a BaBy ThAt oPeNd tHe EyEs FoR tHe FiRsT TiMe
THat cRy WhEn ReAlIty WoKe HiM UP
FrOm ThE DrEaM iT WaS LeAvInG iN

bUt NOw...
DrEaM iS oVeR
lOvE iS gOnE





Poetry by Mari Ruiz
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Written on 2008-09-19 at 02:17

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sangbad
Wow its a really reality...when we awake in the morning we face the harsh face of life...we have to survive fighting all odds...its a beautiful poem..
2008-09-19


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Wasn't sure about the capitalising at first. But then i thought it gives it that stark abstract dream quality which fits well with the poem. And yes it is harsh when dreams are broken by the intrusion of reality. Well expressed.
2008-09-19