My first one :) Be nice


The Unreachable:

Peace was when I couldn't see people outside shooting
War was when I had to run from jews
Teacher was the one getting me to wisdom

Love was when there could be you and me
You were the unreachable for me



Poetry by Hamid
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Written on 2008-10-03 at 22:50

Tags Love  Unreachable  Peace 

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Sarah Mae
Wow
Such talent in your writing
And so much feeling
Well done:)
2008-10-25


Hamid
Thanks and glad u liked it ;)
2008-10-03


normalil
It's full of feeling Hamid, and i liked it. Well done.
2008-10-03