My first try in Haiku writing. ( 5-7-5)
version 1.1 - thanks to Caroline for pointing out the mistake in syllables.


Smile

She comes in my thoughts

And i cannot stop smiling

Does she feel the same ?



Haiku by Kishore ( Rebel Star)
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Written on 2008-10-05 at 09:09

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