Locked In Time.

He searched the oceans, sailed the seas
in search of loves sweet melodys
To charm the girl with sparkling eyes
He'd take the stars from out the skys
And wrap them up in sheets of fire
To show the strengh of his desire
The passion held within his soul
Her love to seek it was his goal
And in his heart he'd hold a rhyme
Of loves sweet pleasures
Locked in time.



Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2006-01-16 at 17:55

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Morpheus
Such a lovely, 'hopeful' poem.. reminiscent of a hearts search for the perfect love. Wonderful...
2006-01-19


Ace
I really liked this one, I fell inlove with this setence : And in his heart he'd hold a rhyme
Of loves sweet pleasures
Locked in time.

Ace
2006-01-17


BlueyedSoul
Another sweet write with great rhythm and rhyme.

~BlueyedSoul
2006-01-17


GB
Hi ! .. Penfold18 you have done it again ! .. Well done ... enjoyed your write ! .... Glen ( GB )
2006-01-17


Zoya Zaidi
"He'd take the stars from out the skys
And wrap them up in sheets of fire
To show the strengh of his desire"
Such a lovely tribute to love Graham!
Almost divine!
((((hugs))))
xxx, Zoya
2006-01-16


Black Knight
Locked in time
This love treasure.
Who can tell me - what is measure
I can offer you for this
To receive from you the keys?
2006-01-16