This text is more positive than it seems (?), written in the first days of winter!


Stargazing as ever

I hereby reject your corrupt world of nothingness
live off your meaningless mess, I'm better off alone
I walk my own path, I enjoy the cold
you could never take it, way too weak

Stripped of your pride, it all crumbles
the failure is finally complete
I lit my own fires, built my own walls
these towers are mine!

False structures and false prophets
never did they see the truth
Stargazing as ever, every atom reorganized
monuments of mighty renewal

Sail the void to the next level
I thrive in these landscapes!



Poetry by J. E.
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Written on 2008-11-11 at 02:43

Tags Strength  Renewal  Meaning 

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Mr painter
This is great i like this
2008-11-12


Palitha Ariyarathna
i really love this poems! we all are alone in this universal!
2008-11-11


Janine>K
I really enjoyed your poem.
it kind of reassure the reader that it's ok to be alone (strengthening the weak) hope this makes sense
I Loved It!!
2008-11-11