Everlast

A handful of stars
for a greater cause

can you see the heavens
open

I accept eternity
now embrace this white
mountain

snow falls to the ground
I am the earth



Poetry by J. E.
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Written on 2010-11-15 at 01:40

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John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
With such unique writing comes a new definition of poetry. Very clever.
2010-11-15


countryfog
Very Zen-like . . . it evoked a line from T'ao Ch'ien's poem "Burial Songs" - "Trust yourself to the mountainside. It will take you in." I don't know whether you read Chinese and Japanese poetry, but you have a kindred perspective and sensibility.
2010-11-15