Watching you watching me...

A stomach filled with butterflies
All of this came as a surprise
I don't know what it implies
But there's something in your eyes
No answers but a lot of why's

When I'm watching you watching me
I tell you...

That you will never breathe my lies
I will never use any kind of disguise
You turn away, something inside me dies
I know that I will take you're advice
I can see the same thing in the skies
No answers but a lot of why's

Therefore I will never stop watching you watching me...




Poetry by Peter
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Written on 2006-01-18 at 20:46

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Kel
i really like this poem just because of its simplicity....its short, and sweet, and i think that it touches a small part of what we feel whenever we're looking at someone, doesn't matter who, and that split second anatomy of 'butterflies' that we get...i really like this poem.
2006-05-31


Feiyn
I enjoyed this one just as much as your other one! A great poem! I love the idea behind it.
2006-03-16


penfold18
Good rhyme ,good flow and good content,well done peter,keep it up :-))
2006-01-20