Inspired again by AC/DC and a fucked up day


Lips on rasberry road (Need a chicken wing )




Satisfied fore nothing

Make my wonder

What i do fore money

I now i do nothing fore you honey

Sweet applejack lips on rasberry road

Looking broke

How are you

Fucked up

Need a chicken wing



Satisfied fore nothing

Make me wonder

What a great day

Living on oatmeal

What a sup-rise

Stiff upper nose

Shot from the hip

Take a nose trip

Make my day

Not La's Vega's but anyway










Poetry by Mr painter
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Written on 2008-11-12 at 18:06

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
The jumbled mesh mash
of words seemingly
thrown together is
what gives this poem
it's flow and makes for
a wonderful read.

GO AC/DC although i'm
more into Nightwish lately.

~L.~
2008-12-03


Janine>K
I loved this! kind off hungry now:-) brillitant strong poem
Hope u feeling better today
Janine
2008-11-13



hey another fun write, love your thoughts, you are a grand painter of poetry with splashes of colourful mild angry thoughts.
2008-11-12