I'm just giving a try


haiku challenge "The unnoticed"



Though I'm still upset
I'm smiling again
The birds can even tell




Haiku by bubble gum
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Written on 2008-11-14 at 18:25

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Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh my god... was that nep setting some rules? Nah, I reckon he was just giving you important advice. Don't forget though; once you know the rules, you are then allowed to break them. :-)

I loved this... especially the last line.
2009-01-28