an interesting idea
I think my friends will know who this is about...


Pantoum


If we could live each others' lives

Would I now feel the way you do?

How much of you by fears disguised

Has made the boy I thought I knew?



Would I now feel the way you do?

So lost, so lonely in that home

That made the boy I thought I knew

Wish to deny his chromosomes



So lost, so lonely in that home

Where ignorance and hate have made

You wish to deny your chromosomes.

And what would come if we could trade?



Such ignorance and hate have made

So much of you by fear disguised.

And what would come if we could trade-

If we could live each others' lives?



Poetry by Aurora
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Written on 2008-11-17 at 01:04

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I suspect that if we could live each others lives, we would be one happy couple, knowing each others worst traits is an advantage, wouldn't you say? Smiling at you, Tai
2008-12-03


WildGoose
seconded on both counts.
2008-11-17


Nick Matherne
I like this a LOT
and I do know who this is about...
2008-11-17