Ok this is the first time
I've done this style so please
forgive me if I've buggered it :)

It's about some so-called friends
that I'm fed up with.

~L.~


Vex Of Lost Compassion (Rubaiyat Challenge)





Your emotional toll comes at my cost
My sensibility's numbed by your frost
Oh how your idiosyncrasies vex me,
Your compassion really seems lost.


You seemed so caring at the start
Your big size appeared to match your heart
But picky and bitchy you have become,
Your words now are like a poison dart.

From your friendship I'm thinking of walking away
For your careless actions ruin my day
I had really hoped it wouldn't come to that,
But for my temper's sake I just can't stay.

14/12/08.




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2008-12-14 at 04:12

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I like the grunt of the text, if you will allow me to use that expression. I could relate to it very well as I am sure most of us can relate to how circumstances can weigh on us. Well written.

Language: 3
Format: 5
Mood: 4
Overall: 5
2009-01-12


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo girl! :) and btw "forgive me if I've buggered it" *giggle* that was so cute! *applause*
2008-12-14