I see you like this

 

I don't see you
like a man who spent his
better days yesterday

I see you as a man
who provides me
with warmth and care

and you turn on the sparkle
who gives me the hunger for
life and loving  

and that life is
with you

and the love is
for you





Poetry by Marlinda
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Written on 2009-01-02 at 09:19

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Marlinda
Thank You Poetic Prince for
the correction! :-)
2009-01-02


Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
Very affectionate, I like it. :-)

In the first stanza, you actually mean "his", not "he's". "His" is possessive, "he's" is the contraction "he is".

Nice work, and welcome to PoetBay!

Happy New Year,
- Thomas
2009-01-02