He came from nowhere and made a stop at my house

 

"He came from nowhere
but he came by
my residence

he moved around
in my most private rooms
like he's never done
anything else

he did fit in

in a mysterious way

His smile
gave wallpapers, curtains
flower and light
a new shade

and his essence   

made mine
reflect delightfully

and it all

took my breath
away "





Poetry by Marlinda
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Written on 2009-10-18 at 00:15

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Achernar
A finely done and very romantical poem... loved it!!
2009-10-23


Rob Graber
Cleverly ambiguous, I suspect, as suggested by the comments!
2009-10-20


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Would it be foolish of me to believe you
were visited by sunshine?

xxx Stan
2009-10-18


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
I love the stanza about "His smile". Beautifully written from a deep place in the heart. Thank You.
2009-10-18


Kathy Lockhart
I hope he comes by my house. This is wonderful. I believe in angels and I believe you've just written of one. : ) kathy
2009-10-18