The opening quote
is from my boyfriend I
thought it was funny and
it inspired this :)

~L.~


Inky Carnage Of Wall Of Thought




"Smash into the wall of thought"
words exploding like stars in my brain,
like a fish,
my pen reels in the words caught,
and they fall to the page like rain,
to be the first out of my pen they've fought,
inky carnage left behind,
like the wreck of a train,
in my brain there is now nought,
as the words have gurgled out of my pen,
like water down a drain.

09/01/09



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-01-13 at 04:16

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I came to comment on this before and I was called away. I'm back again. I like the opening quote, thank you boyfriend for me.
You did well with this, I love the imagination to give me an abstract view of what can be in the magic of a pen. :) Hugs
2009-01-13