So sorry if this affends anyone, this is just how i truly feel.


Cheaters

*I would love to,,,

Kick in your head,

Watch you bleed all over the floor.

Put you eternally to bed,

You and your stupid whore.

Smash in your face,

make you feel the pain.

put you in my place,

so you can feel the rain.

Rip out your eyes,

oh, and hers too.

I'm sick of your lies,

but know what else I would like to do,

*I would love to,,,

Hold you in my arms,

and feel yours around my hips.

Put under the spell of your charms,

and kiss you on the lips.

Like we used to

just me and you

your a dick,

but guess what

I still love you.



Poetry by emma-lou
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Written on 2009-01-15 at 22:38

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Melissa Ormond
This is what love is all about, I imagine!

I don't agree with people having affairs, what they have should be good enough for them (do you know who I'm going on about? Well actually, this is the case for a few people!)

An amazing use of antithesis used, contradicts well and it shows just the right amount of emotion!

Well done:)
2012-01-30


theNUGGET
good poem with a lot of anger em
(:
x
2010-01-26


amandeep
two different situation.. just changed with a sudden

nice ..well expressed

Welcome to this bay of love and peace
2009-01-16


Pokershark
Very strong Very powerfull poem, full of emotion to be honest captures a lot of what it is to be human :)
2009-01-15