...The Second Side To It

Whe are such tiny creatures
When you really think of it.
Think of the larger side
Such as the planet in orbit.

But now just get much bigger
To the sun which make the sky bright
but just don't stop there
The solar system isn't even in sight.

When you get to the end
To the largest of them all
The whole of the universe is huge
makes me feel so so small.

So compared to the universe
We are only a speck
The atom to the universe
Who's in charge? We need to double check!

We are the tiniest there can be
Yet the biggest of them all
The tall can be oh so small
And the small can be extra tall.



Poetry by emma-lou
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Written on 2011-11-11 at 22:15

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Melissa Ormond
The last stanza confused me a little, I'm not good with puzzles, but overall I enjoyed reading this! The views expressed in this are so true! We've created so much in this society - people, technology and lots of conflict to go with it, who knows when it'll all stop!

Well done Emma, a great write as always is the case with you!
Keep writing and most importantly don't dwell on thoughts! But on the other hand ... do dwell on thoughts because you make such great texts when writing them all down!
:)
2012-01-30