Life Is Crawling



Nothing to show

To soon to tell

Losing at the finish line

Is a problem fore a living spirit

As the die one by one

A lying word

I scratch the surface close that broken tear

Change your name

Put in a box

Living shoe steps away

Some fun

Life Is Crawling





Poetry by Mr painter
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Written on 2009-02-07 at 16:13

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Zoya Zaidi
this business of losing at finish line is so weird, reminds me of my own line from an Urdu poem:
'Why do I reach the destination,
and come beack
just before the finishing line...'

I think we do that because we don't want to touch the finishing line...
Some where in subconscious we avoid that very success when it is about to kiss our feet...

(((Hugs)))
Love,
Zoya
2009-02-08