A friend who helps me edit my work said to not used the word [among many] bloody and write 'fuck' instead.
This is dedicated to my good friend Micheal M.


Warning you may be OFFENDED!

I've been told my poems are worded to 'nice',
so Miceal M -
this one's for you,
I am finally taking your advice -
to say to people
[when I write]
''Fuck Off! this is my life,
don't tell me what to fucking do."

I do war you -
you may be OFFENDED!
by the fucking language in this poem,
[quite unusual for me]
If you are -
I apologise,
Nah! on second thoughts -
FUCK IT!
I am tired of wearing this fucking 'happy' disguise.

25/01/06




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-01-27 at 08:04

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Celtic boy
I love reading ALL your poems and this one is no different. It leaps off the page!
But I have to disagree with using cuss words :(
Sorry for that.
Liam
2006-01-27


kip
...this is just too real, it's fuckin' it, driving the point right home...i love the attitude...
2006-01-27