The second version
of the same poem, just
with the lines switched around.
I couldn't decide which I liked better.

~L.~


[Ver.B]Melancholy Blues[Triolet]




Melancholy blues hold me tight,
Although I try, I can't shake them,
Unbeknowing how to make it right
Melancholy blues, hold me tight
Sacrificing sleep EVERY night.
Consistent mistakes, made AGAIN,
melancholy blues hold me tight
Although I try I can't shake them.

12/02/09



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-03-03 at 04:39

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