My very first attempt.
Welcome to the weirdness
of my brain :-)

~L~


Citrus Men (Trois-Par-Huit)



Corrodes blades,
Yellow of multi-shades,
Always dancing up and down the knife.

Subtly, lemon juices cause such happy strife
Acidic corrosion assassinating life,

With silver blade we attacked their den
So fighting back, they send,
Citrus Men.

20/3/09



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-03-20 at 14:55

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
Yellow is my favorite color.
Delightful read.
2009-03-20


Brian Oarr
This is an exceptional poem ... nothing more really need be said, save this --- This piece should win the contest going away. "Citrus Men" is a truly remarkable metaphor. Take a bow!
2009-03-20