Theoretically...

Relax, close your eyes, and imagine.
Theoretically, would it be okay?
Would it be okay, if say... I wrote a poem?
I wrote a poem without ever knowing what to say?
Would that be okay?
Suppose I even filled it up
With nonsense all the way.
Rasta zebras swirling, sifting, bowing down to pray
to neon black encapsulations from another day.
Suppose rhythm was somewhat absent from some of the lines
Or maybe they were sorta unspecific and stuff
What if I wrote it just to put it here on poetbay?
Would that be okay?
Would you still love me anyway?







Poetry by Morgan Cellohead
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Written on 2009-04-11 at 20:04

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Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
Haha...I love this. It's so offbeat and somehow soothing at the same time. It made me smile.

I like Kaede's comment on it too. =)
2009-04-14


Kaede
hmmm....=)
What if my comments were really unhelpful and said nothing?
If I just rambled on and on because I feel like writing a poem like this but you already did and yours is cool and if I wrote another like it I would just be copying you?
Would that be okay also?
2009-04-11