I love dickerson road


A Bike Ride

I wend my verdant way
where dust eddies sift
and settle in the trees

and wade through falls of sunlight-
careful to get completely soaked.



Poetry by Aurora
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Written on 2009-05-22 at 00:15

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Rob Graber
Wending through dust and wading through falls of sunlight: great sounds, great imagery! At first reading, I was puzzled by how "wading" might be part of a bike ride; then I hit on a very satisfying interpretation indeed.
2009-05-22


Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
Simply beautiful. =)
2009-05-22


Morgan Cellohead
I would definitely have liked to have been there with you guys... Next time, I'll go on the beautiful afternoon bike ride, and you can take your turn at whatever the hell I was doing today... getting blinded on stage and such... :D sound like a plan? Nice poem.
2009-05-22


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Wet and wonderful!
2009-05-22


Ducks
I really like your word choice (diction)
It creates a really wispy tone
but here ends my Higgins analysis
this is really pretty
I like the image
yay!
2009-05-22



Very nice work, so many layers of leaves.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-05-22