Inspired by Zoya and Kip. My attempt at their wonderful series.
It might be a bit short.


Sometimes I feel like the beehive, other times I feel like the raincloud [In response to Zoya's and Kip's Sometimes series.]

Sometimes I feel like the beehive -
Tall, white and strong -
Guarding the precious honey
and busy bee workers like kip,
Proud against predators
to be protecting you both from.

Other times I feel like the raincloud
sprinkling my life-giving rain
On sky-reaching flowers like Zoya,
So your radiant beauty
is given time to shine
for the pollening bee once again.

03/02/06



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-02-03 at 09:49

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Justin
Very lovely......Nothing else I can say, Very lovely.
2006-02-03


Celtic boy
Awesome, just... awesome!
2006-02-03


Zoya Zaidi
When you are the beehive, dear Lizzy,
I am the honey, you protect caringly,
Sweet is my flavour, that I pour lovingly,
Into every pore that you offer to me,
My sweetness I spread and share with you,
Without your protection, I would spill over too,
So thank you dear beehive, for being home to me!

(((((Hugs dear Lizzy, you are sweet as honey!)))))

Love,xxx, Zoya
2006-02-03


kip
...i must admit that this is a most excellent write...not just an attempt but an inspiring piece...
...i'll certainly think up something to respond...
2006-02-03