A lonely tree

Sat beside this lonely tree is me
I look up to the branches
I close my eyes and think about my chances
Inspiration standing before me
All of a sudden i feel free
Dark clouds circle around
They start to make a banging sound
Rain begins to fall
But the tree still stands tall
What it would be like to be this tree
To stand there strong and free



Poetry by danielle289
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Written on 2009-06-11 at 17:30

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Tango
This is very good. A tree is a very stable object, not likeour lives which ebb, and flow like the tide.
Tango.
2009-09-25


Tango
This is very good, a tree is something stable, and solid,always there, not like our lives which ebb, and flow like the tide.
Tango.
2009-09-25


Tango
This is very good, a tree is so solid, and stable, not like our lives which ebb, and flow like the tides.
Tango.
2009-09-24


Charlie
Wonderful piece, thank you for posting it! Charlie
2009-08-26


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Danielle...congratulations for having written a very lovely and
thoughtful poem

xxx Stan
2009-06-15


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
And further more... this text is awesome!
2009-06-11


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
It would be lovely to be a tree. I love the simple connection you have made of the human spirit with nature; and although I can feel the sadness in this; these words are still very beautiful to me. I think you'd love Mary Oliver, but then; I've just discovered her so I am a little excitedly biased. Thank You for sharing this. :)
2009-06-11



Thats lovely. I really understand it. Excellent write.
2009-06-11