The Ride


enjoy the ride
and while you're in it
be prepared to let it go
for the swing becomes
more gentle
when you kiss the to and fro





Poetry by Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-06-16 at 09:21

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Kathy Lockhart
a very profound piece. Kissing the to and fro gives freedom to fly!
bookmarked and favs. because this is great stuff. : D kathy
2009-06-16



Hm ... You mean to stop screaming, close my eyes and follow the movements? ;-) Rides and rollercoasters always scares the life out of me, but the to an fro I know allright ...

Nicely captured. Mi piace veramente :-)
2009-06-16


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
This grabs me
and makes me
want to reread it
over & over

I esp like the last line

~L.~
2009-06-16