Weird...I found some half
scribbled lines & put this together

~L.~


Underwater/Above Water Chain Reaction


On contact with humans dumping polutions
which scare beaching walruses that wake
sleeping giant stingrays as fast swimming
seals slap racing whales and running
seahorses tease laughing clownfish as
dynamite coral bring colourful explosions
while marching sharks attack jellyfish fields
as mermaids whispering sirens to sailors
dance and fly with glittery hair tonight.

Tonight dancing and flying with glittery hair
mermaids whispering sirens to sailors
while maching sharks attack jellyfish fields
as dynamite coral bring colourful explosions
and running seahorses tease laughing clownfish
as fast swimming seals slap racing whales that
wake sleeping giant stingrays which scare
beaching walruses that cause contact
with humans dumping polutions.

13/07/09



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-07-15 at 15:50

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normalil
Such a kaleidoscope of realism. Well done, I love it.
2009-07-15


Phill
I like it :D and its true, we gotta save what we have started to destroy. the desires of humans don't surpass the necesities of nature. we've got the potential, we've got the technology, but humans won't change until their on the brink of destruction.

anyways, great write, i enjoyed it
2009-07-15