I'm personally not that satisfied with it....any criticism!?


It always will be You

I look into your eyes
Dark brown, so deep, so intense
My breath gets caught in my throat
It seems like you can see my soul
But I'm sure you can't or else you would know

You smile
If it was only meant the way I want it to
There are others in the world
So why does it have be you?
Why is it you that holds my heart?
That held it from the start?
When you are the one that doesn't want it at all

But does this mean I can't love you?
Maybe I shouldn't
But I do
I'm just too scared to tell you
Afraid to hear from your lips in return
What I'm aware of already so well

I wish I could speak those simple words
Let you know that I'd die if it meant you lived
That I'd give everything I own for your happiness

I started to hate myself for the feelings I bear
Though whatever I do
I will always come back to you
There's no other way for me to go
You are what I want, what I need
But just can't have
And after everything you've put me through
Baby, I still love you




Poetry by Rebeca
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Written on 2009-07-15 at 18:33

Tags Love  Unrequited 

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chuma okafor
Very touching...infused in these lines are musical undertone,it flows from a heart,that i believe has so much love in it,furthermore, i think more imagery and the like would make it more wonderful...good one! cheers
2009-07-15