Came from a Conversation
I thought it would be happier
but that's Muse for you, it takes
you to off-roads you don't expect.

~L.~


Special In The Head



Trapped in an asylum of memories
straight jacketed in the feelings
of you that tenaciously cling on,
like the tentacles of a staving octopus.

Special in the head of crazy mentals and
ghoulish nightmares perverting reality,
into twisted beasts of burden that keep
chewing on the cud of this unstable mind.

Realness of sanctuary doesn't have a place
in this twisted disingenuousism of head space
I am special in the head and to that I say
"I do not want to be any other way!"

25/07/09








Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-07-25 at 13:10

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Rapscallion
This is fantastic. Made my evening.
2009-09-11


Sanaz Danaipoor
Ure imagery is beautiful and takes the reader to a different level, i always enjoy reading ure texts and its really amusing and inspirational!
2009-07-25


Brian Oarr
I'm really starting to like your writing, Liz. This piece is chock full of metaphor and engaging word play.You save the posting board from dreadful mundacity today. Kudos to you, poet!

Language: 5
Format: 4
Mood: 4
Overall: 5
2009-07-25


NicholasG
Nor do we! (want you to be any other way :-)
2009-07-25