I like this one also. I need to remove a syllable form the second line.


Suicide II

Inside this car I drive
Of the cliff it takes a dive
Me within it
No longer alive




Poetry by Daniel
Read 1052 times
Written on 2006-02-08 at 07:58

Tags Suicide  Car 

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