Guess who he is.


Remnants

Ancient boat that sailed
Led by invisible stars
Old man was hailed
But never let outside bars

His blood spilled
Old man of age
His mind killed
He was let out of his cage



Haiku by Crake
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Written on 2009-07-27 at 12:16

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Achernar
A short but most arcane piece of poetry and quite potent in its mystery! ah, who, indeed. I'm thinking of Charon, Noah and Ra or Amon-Ra....but I think all of these are incorrect.... fine write!

Language: 4
Format: 4
Mood: 4
Overall: 4
2009-08-05